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©2004-2010 ~waterwave
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well, I tried to make somting Technical like "plastic" style...
ended in a comic Layout, I myself don't know wheater it's good or not, so pleas give me your ideas to complet this wallpaper.

And this is the first update..

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:icontaynt:
personally i dont think it needs any changing except for the font. the "The best way to clean vinyls..." text doesnt fit with the rest of the work, maybe its just the shadows - because everything else is flat or in 3d, and the shadows dont look right. apart from that i think its a great job.

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Aotearoa
:iconwaterwave:
as I wrote you jaust one minute before...allready changed:-)

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:icontaynt:
you wrote me before?

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Aotearoa
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Doesen't matter:-)

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:iconhardstyle:
agrees, the font looks a little out of place, try a diff font without the shadows, id like to ssee what that looks like, other than that i like this

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:iconwaterwave:
you're right, ut one big problem is, that I haven't a good font to write a good typo. Do you know a good font?

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:iconhardstyle:
actaully mate since u have removed the outlines it looks veryg ood with that font now, leave it man, its good now
now that youve done that theres one more thing and i think thta you could so a little more detail on the turnies, like the arm and that, id like to see an outline or shadow or something to define the technical shapes of it

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:iconwaterwave:
you have very good ideas, I'll try an outline...shadow would be too much.

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